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Every year, more and mora people going to work abroad because of works in our country are disappearing, they don´t find a job according with their studies or their jobs aren´t well-paid.

Spending yo your time going to work abroad has many advantages.

The main advantages is that you can learn a new language.

Another advantage is the self-confidence that you gain from doing these experiences.

In addition, traveling let you to know different kind of people.

On the other hand, there are also some important disadvantages.

Although this opportunity let you to enjoy the city like a tourist, this adventure has a lot of risks.

An important disadvantage is that your family and friends are far away.

Another disadvantage is that you have to be extremely responsible, because you are alone in a new city.

Furthermore, learning a new language is a bite difficult at the beginning, especially if you don´t speak it.

To sum up, from my point of view, going to work abroad have both advantages and disadvantages, and you have to choose...

Which group do you prefer?