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Văn bản từ Sevgilerle - English

  • Studying abroad

  • 1) Why did I choose that type of stay and what obstacles did I face?
  • At the beginning I wanted to go abroad to be a French Language Assistant in Australia in my final year (L3) because teaching is my dream job and because I really want to go to Australia.
  • While doing my research on the CIEP website, I read that all the applicants must have completed at least a first-cycle (Bachelor’s) degree at the time of application, so I had to forget this option and look for another one.
  • I discovered that our university has an agreement with James Cook University in Townsville, Australia.
  • I almost jumped for joy when I saw that !
  • My husband and I have planned everything : he would come with me in Australia with a Working Holiday Visa to try to find a job while I study.
  • Unfortunately, everything have fallen down when I have learned that I could not apply to this student exchange because I don't have 9000€ in my bank account.
  • I was really dismayed (and I still am !) and I decided to opt for Birmingham.
  • I love England, the university offers great courses and all the students I have asked about life there told me it was really nice.

Xin hãy chỉnh sửa từng câu giúp tôi! - English

  • Tiêu đề
  • câu 1
  • câu 2
    • At the beginning I wanted to go abroad to be a French Language Assistant in Australia in my final year (L3) because teaching is my dream job and because I really want to go to Australia.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
    • While doing my research on the CIEP website, I read that all the applicants must have completed at least a first-cycle (Bachelor’s) degree at the time of application, so I had to forget this option and look for another one.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
  • câu 4
    • I discovered that our university has an agreement with James Cook University in Townsville, Australia.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
  • câu 6
    • My husband and I have planned everything : he would come with me in Australia with a Working Holiday Visa to try to find a job while I study.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
  • câu 7
    • Unfortunately, everything have fallen down when I have learned that I could not apply to this student exchange because I don't have 9000€ in my bank account.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
  • câu 8
  • câu 9
    • I love England, the university offers great courses and all the students I have asked about life there told me it was really nice.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9