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My best summer
In 2008 I travelled to the USA on a student programme.
It were my first travel abroad.
And of course I was delighted, when I entered on the ground after 10 hours of flight.
America were friendly and hospitality.
I was very happy when I climbed out of the subway and I seen to the New York City.
So my best summer began!

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- My best summer
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句子 1
- In 2008 I travelled to the USA on a student programme.
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句子 2
- It were my first travel abroad.
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句子 3
- And of course I was delighted, when I entered on the ground after 10 hours of flight.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- America were friendly and hospitality.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- I was very happy when I climbed out of the subway and I seen to the New York City.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5
句子 6
- So my best summer began!
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6