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從AnhHo來的文本 - English

  • a company in China has turned a building's terrace into

  • According to a curator of the company, the farm named " the happy farm" is constructed to reduce pressure for staffs after hours of hard work.
  • In spite of being constructed in the terrace of the skyscraper, "the happy farm" doesn't fall behind any other farm in the ground.
  • Easy to see that the farm has enough pond, orchard, garden, meadow etc. If there are any spare time, staffs who are working here can take care and collect produce by themselves as the real farmers.

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    • According to a curator of the company, the farm named " the happy farm" is constructed to reduce pressure for staffs after hours of hard work.
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    • In spite of being constructed in the terrace of the skyscraper, "the happy farm" doesn't fall behind any other farm in the ground.
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    • Easy to see that the farm has enough pond, orchard, garden, meadow etc. If there are any spare time, staffs who are working here can take care and collect produce by themselves as the real farmers.
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