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Love---
When I was in my graduation from 9, when finished the ceremony, Xiomy gave me a present, and congratulate me.
Later, we went by car to Xiomy's home to drank something, but I don't know what was.
At dinner, she started to record all and she record me while I ate and I got angry, but later when I saw me on the film, I started to smile.
Later, we went to pc to chat with our friends, I like chat, she don't like too.
I like write letters, Xiomy and I together have a notebook where we write, is as a daily.

vaness182November 2012100% GOOD (1 votes)
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- When I was in my graduation from 9, when finished the ceremony, Xiomy gave me a present, and congratulate me.
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- Later, we went by car to Xiomy's home to drank something, but I don't know what was.
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- At dinner, she started to record all and she record me while I ate and I got angry, but later when I saw me on the film, I started to smile.
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- Later, we went to pc to chat with our friends, I like chat, she don't like too.
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- I like write letters, Xiomy and I together have a notebook where we write, is as a daily.
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