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  • The first pie chart....

  • The first pie chart shows the percentage of government expenditure for culture and education in the year 1995 and 2005 and the second bar chart shows changes in the number of people who participated in arts events in the same years.
  • It is noticeable that the government spent significantly more money on music than any other fields of arts.
  • We can also see that arts events related to music accounted for the largest number of audiences in both of years 1995 and 2005.

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    • The first pie chart shows the percentage of government expenditure for culture and education in the year 1995 and 2005 and the second bar chart shows changes in the number of people who participated in arts events in the same years.
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    • We can also see that arts events related to music accounted for the largest number of audiences in both of years 1995 and 2005.
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