Pataisymai

SKUBAUS TAISYMO PAGALBA!Netaisyta

Text from eb30 - English

One day in my life
Hello everybody.
Yesterday i met my friend i do not see him for long time and wee ate lunch together after that i went to my house and study math .
I it is very hard subject to me .
In the evening i went with my mother to department store and we bought some clothes .
At night i came back to my house and start write my second novel . this was my day in my city .
And this is me : Ibrahim from yemen !
The store is not real .
please add me : skype : aaa_bm_2008@hotmail.com .
I want to improve my English !
Thanks for your time .

Title
- One day in my life
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Sentence 1
- Hello everybody.
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Sentence 2
- Yesterday i met my friend i do not see him for long time and wee ate lunch together after that i went to my house and study math .
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Sentence 3
- I it is very hard subject to me .
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Sentence 4
- In the evening i went with my mother to department store and we bought some clothes .
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Sentence 5
- At night i came back to my house and start write my second novel . this was my day in my city .
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Sentence 6
- And this is me : Ibrahim from yemen !
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Sentence 7
- The store is not real .
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Sentence 8
- please add me : skype : aaa_bm_2008@hotmail.com .
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Sentence 9
- I want to improve my English !
  Balsuok dabar!
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Sentence 10
- Thanks for your time .
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