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hi
my name is lina and i'm 16 years old i want learn english.
I never had been in a website like this but this website is fun and practical

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- hi
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句子 1
- my name is lina and i'm 16 years old i want learn english.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I never had been in a website like this but this website is fun and practical
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2