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Blackout
We didn't use to be at home all the time, but one day our mother said to us that Michael our step-father was going to come to dinner that night, we were afraid of his bad temper.
However , my mother thought he was a good man, but she doesn't know what he did.
Then he arrived and talked with our mother, suddenly all the lights began to blink and it was a black out.
Everyone was scaried about what it was happening, nobody knew this man turned all the lights off, although he didn't know these kids figured out all he tried to do.
So, they said everything about him to police and he was arrested.
Now, he has been 10 years in prison and must spend there 30 years more.

Başlık
- Blackout
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cümle 1
- We didn't use to be at home all the time, but one day our mother said to us that Michael our step-father was going to come to dinner that night, we were afraid of his bad temper.
  Şİmdi oyla!
- YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 1
cümle 2
- However , my mother thought he was a good man, but she doesn't know what he did.
  Şİmdi oyla!
- YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 2
cümle 3
- Then he arrived and talked with our mother, suddenly all the lights began to blink and it was a black out.
  Şİmdi oyla!
- YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 3
cümle 4
- Everyone was scaried about what it was happening, nobody knew this man turned all the lights off, although he didn't know these kids figured out all he tried to do.
  Şİmdi oyla!
- YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 4
cümle 5
- So, they said everything about him to police and he was arrested.
  Şİmdi oyla!
- YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 5
cümle 6
- Now, he has been 10 years in prison and must spend there 30 years more.
  Şİmdi oyla!
- YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 6