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My Dream
Hello.
My name is Reddit.
i want to tell you about my dream.
well, just like other people, i want to travel the world.
especially Europe, why ?
I think, europe is great place. I love london.
my sister told me that i'm naive, why ?
because i never visited london, but i'm already loved it.
Lol I need a lot of money to travel the world right ?
i have to workhard.
please correct my error.

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- Hello.
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- My name is Reddit.
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- i want to tell you about my dream.
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- well, just like other people, i want to travel the world.
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- especially Europe, why ?
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- my sister told me that i'm naive, why ?
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- because i never visited london, but i'm already loved it.
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- Lol I need a lot of money to travel the world right ?
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- i have to workhard.
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