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animals farm
Animal Farm is a novel by George Orwell published in 1945.
This is the story of animals that live on a farm.
They live in poverty.
One day they decide to rebel against the farmer Mr. Jones.
They want more freedom, they decide to draft legislation consists of seven laws for equalities between animals.
But peace had little time for the pigs decide to take power and impose their laws a little racist.
George Orwell pigs compared to the Germans during the Second World War.

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- Animal Farm is a novel by George Orwell published in 1945.
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- This is the story of animals that live on a farm.
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- They live in poverty.
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- One day they decide to rebel against the farmer Mr. Jones.
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- They want more freedom, they decide to draft legislation consists of seven laws for equalities between animals.
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- But peace had little time for the pigs decide to take power and impose their laws a little racist.
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- George Orwell pigs compared to the Germans during the Second World War.
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