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Text from Marc94190 - English

  • Music

  • Since my childhood, I've been fond of music, especially British pop-rock music of the 60' and the 70's.
  • I was only 7 when my brother came back home with an album of the Beatles.
  • For me, it was a revelation, something I had never heard before.
  • I asked my brother about this "new band".
  • A new band? he answered.
  • The Beatles splitted up 3 years ago!
  • They are probably the most famous rock band ever! He added.
  • It was in 1973.
  • Since then, I have improved my musical knowledges and listened to lots of bands from the UK or the US.
  • I do appreciate present-day bands as well.
  • But I am still a big fan of the music of those days.
  • I recently visited Liverpool, various venues where this music can still be listened today, and of course places where "the four lads who shook the world" used to play.

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