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On monday sixteenth march 2015
Today i went to go and see my close freind Thierry at Pau, a city close to Pyrénées mountains.
The weather was sunny.
I arrived at middle at Thierry's home.
He was cooking the meal, meat and patatoes frites.
It had good taste.
He watched me his new construction, a little house of wood in his garden.
It is so nice and useful because he can tide inside his tools and bicycles.
I saw his girlfreind Valérie and took a coffee with her after the meal.
She is a teacher for little children.
We discussed for a long time because we did not see us for three weeks.
Have a nice evening all.

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- On monday sixteenth march 2015
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- Today i went to go and see my close freind Thierry at Pau, a city close to Pyrénées mountains.
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- The weather was sunny.
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- I arrived at middle at Thierry's home.
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- He was cooking the meal, meat and patatoes frites.
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- It had good taste.
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- He watched me his new construction, a little house of wood in his garden.
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- It is so nice and useful because he can tide inside his tools and bicycles.
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- I saw his girlfreind Valérie and took a coffee with her after the meal.
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- She is a teacher for little children.
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- We discussed for a long time because we did not see us for three weeks.
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- Have a nice evening all.
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