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Mississippi.
Hello, dear friend! How are you?
A week ago I went to America.
In America there is a set of sights, but I went there, to book at the rivers of America.
I will tell about Mississippi.
The Mississippi river is the chief river of the largest drainage system in North America.
Flowing entirely in the U.S., it rises in northern Minnesota and meanders slowly southwards for 2.320 miles (3.730 km) to the Mississippi River Pelta at the Cult of Mexico.
It is the greatest river of the World.
So, when you will go to America, first of all look at this river.
With respect for, M.

Judul
- Mississippi.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Judul
Kalimat 1
- Hello, dear friend! How are you?
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 1
Kalimat 2
- A week ago I went to America.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 2
Kalimat 3
- In America there is a set of sights, but I went there, to book at the rivers of America.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 3
Kalimat 4
- I will tell about Mississippi.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 4
Kalimat 5
- The Mississippi river is the chief river of the largest drainage system in North America.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 5
Kalimat 6
- Flowing entirely in the U.S., it rises in northern Minnesota and meanders slowly southwards for 2.320 miles (3.730 km) to the Mississippi River Pelta at the Cult of Mexico.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 6
Kalimat 7
- It is the greatest river of the World.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 7
Kalimat 8
- So, when you will go to America, first of all look at this river.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 8
Kalimat 9
- With respect for, M.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 9