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  • visit for a twins

  • today i visited my neighbord her woman makes a twins, male and female they are very lovely, when my son one old year saw them he was happy and he smile but they have not the firstname because in her culture it is after nine days for male or seven for female that her parents can give them a first name in a ceremony.

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    • today i visited my neighbord her woman makes a twins, male and female they are very lovely, when my son one old year saw them he was happy and he smile but they have not the firstname because in her culture it is after nine days for male or seven for female that her parents can give them a first name in a ceremony.
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