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Text from Rsya_smple - English

  • Last Holiday Part 2

  • And after took a long time, my train had came.
  • OH MY GOD ! the train is really brought the Paris Atmosphere.
  • I can feel how it goes. so I can imagined how is beautiful Paris.
  • The train took me to Paris for 3 hours and I slept along the way.
  • I felt tired because I'd been in plane for 14 hours and I'd yet to sleep. so I used this chance to get sleep, and I'm not regret it because it's night, and the view of the way is dark too, so i cannot saw anything in outside.
  • 3 hours I'd spent, finally I arrived in PARIS !
  • Oh My God !! it's PARIS !!!.
  • The city that always in my mind for recent 3 months after my father took the Airline ticket to Amsterdam and bought train ticket to Paris. AND !! I FORGOT!!
  • I just wore one layer clothes and a jacket.
  • I was freakin freezing.
  • I was trembling because it's too cold.
  • I walked to the outside and was finding for the taxi. finally I got it, and the taxi brought us to the hotel directly.
  • while i entered the room, the first thing that i searched is bed !
  • YEAH BED !!!. because I'd yet to found bed for almost 24 hours. directly I went to the bathroom for changin my clothes and took a bath. after I took a bath, I slept directly.
  • And that day gonna be my exhausting day.
  • -to be continued-

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