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If I am rich one day for any reason, I would like to live in a house near to the beach, a place with big waves who I'll can surf anytimes, a place with a beautiful landscape and good weather.
I will go to the USA and I'll be producer of films.
I will organize big party with celebrities and friends.
I will give money to associations and to my parents.

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- If I am rich one day for any reason, I would like to live in a house near to the beach, a place with big waves who I'll can surf anytimes, a place with a beautiful landscape and good weather.
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- I will go to the USA and I'll be producer of films.
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- I will organize big party with celebrities and friends.
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- I will give money to associations and to my parents.
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