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  • Exchange Student.

  • I just want to read my opinion about xchange student. i thought so many person that want to follow it, but not little person too that refused that program. they don't want to follow that program because one reason, they don't want to repeat a year in Indonesia. whereas i believe if we follow that program, we will get so much rare experiences such as for staying a year in abroad as student and get many friends.
  • And we get an experience that people doesn't get experience like us. i thought for repeating a year in Indonesia is not a big deal.

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    • I just want to read my opinion about xchange student. i thought so many person that want to follow it, but not little person too that refused that program. they don't want to follow that program because one reason, they don't want to repeat a year in Indonesia. whereas i believe if we follow that program, we will get so much rare experiences such as for staying a year in abroad as student and get many friends.
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    • And we get an experience that people doesn't get experience like us. i thought for repeating a year in Indonesia is not a big deal.
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