批改

现在就来帮忙修正吧！裸眼

從J_u_l_I_e來的文本 - English

原始版本
更正后的版本。

Verify my grammar please. This sentence show the intention.
Jake asked if she and Mark were really going to go in Ottawa.
Or Jakes asked if she and Mark were really going in Ottawa.

J_u_l_I_eMarch 2015赶紧投票吧！
- 举报为垃圾信息？

请帮忙修正每一个句子 - English

标题
- Verify my grammar please. This sentence show the intention.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- Jake asked if she and Mark were really going to go in Ottawa.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- Or Jakes asked if she and Mark were really going in Ottawa.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2