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  • New technologies

  • I belong to a generation which have grown as the same time that new technologies were developed and it’s true that my childhood has been linked to them.
  • When I was little I enjoyed watching TV or playing computers games during hours.
  • However, I hadn’t noticed the big influence that new technologies exercises in my life until I become a teenager.
  • Nowadays, new technologies are part of my daily life.
  • Thanks to my mobile phone I can be connected to Internet all day and it allows me to chat with my friends, listen to music, search information, etc. Even at school new technologies have started to revolutionize the way teachers give their course and it’s normal that we watch videos in the electronic white boards.
  • New technologies have made easier our day to day and it seems impossible to imagine our life without them.

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    • I belong to a generation which have grown as the same time that new technologies were developed and it’s true that my childhood has been linked to them.
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    • However, I hadn’t noticed the big influence that new technologies exercises in my life until I become a teenager.
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    • Thanks to my mobile phone I can be connected to Internet all day and it allows me to chat with my friends, listen to music, search information, etc. Even at school new technologies have started to revolutionize the way teachers give their course and it’s normal that we watch videos in the electronic white boards.
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