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How to stay in a good shape
If I want to stay in a good shape I have to work out every day.
But sometimes I have no time or energy to work out.
My exercise consists mainly of fitness and it lasts 10 to 30 minutes.
I have no strength or time for more challenging exercises.
I am mad because human body is so weak and it is so hard to keep it healthy and in a good shape.

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- If I want to stay in a good shape I have to work out every day.
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- But sometimes I have no time or energy to work out.
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- My exercise consists mainly of fitness and it lasts 10 to 30 minutes.
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- I have no strength or time for more challenging exercises.
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- I am mad because human body is so weak and it is so hard to keep it healthy and in a good shape.
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