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Fate
You’re right.
I don't speak well German.
You're behaving as five years old child.
You has already got accustomed to hate deeply your past, but you don’t do something to change your life and being happy now and later.
You're adult and you can yourself decide, how you want to live.
World will not be changed itself, because you want it.

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- Fate
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câu 1
- You’re right.
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câu 2
- I don't speak well German.
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câu 3
- You're behaving as five years old child.
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câu 4
- You has already got accustomed to hate deeply your past, but you don’t do something to change your life and being happy now and later.
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câu 5
- You're adult and you can yourself decide, how you want to live.
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câu 6
- World will not be changed itself, because you want it.
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