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Cupko (a dog's name)(male) A little dog had to live alone because its owners had thrown out him on the street.

The owners didn't want to feed Cupko because they had already been feeding his mother.

His mom has cried for him for a long time.Cupko also has cried for his mother and was frightened too.

Cupko was still too little to live alone on the street.

He was running off from the children who wanted to beat him.He was cold and was hungry.Sometimes he would find some bones in a trash.

Cupko would snatch a bone and run off whit.

He thought that someone would bit him because bone had been stolen.

But bones were hard,and his teeth week.That was one of the reasons that cupko had been always hungry.Cupko tried to find some friends with whom he could speak and say all of his problems about.But Cupko couldn't find the friends.

When Cupko see the others dogs, he would come to them waving his tail, but no one didn't love him.Every day he was weaker and hungrier.He was walking hardly and it seemed that he would die very soon.When dark fell,he would try to find some a warmly place to sleep.

But warms days haven't come yet.

Sometimes was still snowing.It was cold outside.But after a while he finally found some place to sleep, it was a box made from a cardboard.

One morning at/on the other part of the city a boy was going toward to the school with a bag on his back.

While he was walking along a road he hit(past) the stones, papers, boxes...

When he hit a box which had stayed along/by a road, from it came a little ragged puppy looking frightened.

Allan stopped and looked at him thinking: what is that?

A puppy wasn't nice.

He was dirty and thin.

At his ragged hair was caught burdocks.

He tried to escape that wasn't hit by Allan but he hasn't power for it( he tried to escape from Allan, because he thought that Allan would hit him.

) Allan didn't want to hit him, he saw that miserable animal had been already half a dead of hunger and cold.He took him whit on the arms and returned at home.

And they live for a long time happy.