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Text from TanyaDudkina - English

  • can you check my text?

  • The fragment I'd like to interpret was taken from the book "Village School" and it was written by Laurie Lee.
  • The author's communicative aim is to arouse in us a feeling of anxiety for children who study in the village schools.
  • Laurie Lee shares with the reader his own very painful at times but anyway very useful school life experience.
  • He raises different problems of education such as the problem of relationships between peers, the problem of education in the village schools, the problem of school conflicts.
  • The theme is relationships between newcomers and veterans.
  • The setting of the story is the village school.
  • At the beginning of its story, the author describes a rather poor conditions in the village school.
  • In the plot of this story the author describes his first unsuccessful acquaintance with the village school and classmates.
  • Especially the author draws our attention to tense atmosphere in the classroom.
  • The author reveals the cruelty of students to newcomers.
  • He arouses in us a feeling of regret and sympathy to him.
  • I consider that in his story the author uses hyperbole, because it's so cruel and rude, I think.

POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ KAŻDE ZDANIE Z OSOBNA - English