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Maleficent
Maleficent is a faery that lives in peace with all forest's creatures.
One day her lover leave she for to marrie a princess.

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- Maleficent
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句子 1
- Maleficent is a faery that lives in peace with all forest's creatures.
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句子 2
- One day her lover leave she for to marrie a princess.
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