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  • superhero

  • I'll tell you my story: All it began when I whas a teenager, when my parents died.
  • I blam everyone to have deleted/eliminated me my family.
  • I was often angry against people who around me.
  • One day, while I was in rage, it happened to me something special.
  • I was closing my eyes and thinking of desert island where I will be alone and quiet.
  • When suddenly I felt my lungs to compress, the time of a second.
  • When I oppened my eyes, I realized that a miracle had happened, I had arrived in a fraction of second on this island I was dreaming/about which I dreamed.
  • I not believed my eyes.
  • So I closed my eyes thinking hard at another location/place.
  • By magic than a second I was here!
  • Since that day I've traveled the world, I discovered all countries and met many people, which/what made me forge then my grief/sorrow.
  • Now I live with my superpower, or rather this gift that nature give me.

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