التصحيحات

نص من - English

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In th 1st conflict the author reveals the attitude of the crowd against the newcomer.
The 2d conflict allows the reader to trace the internal changes of the main character in the beginning and at the end of this story.
In the 1st day of school the author is very confused and timid, he is afraid of peers.
A week later he gets used to the surroundings and feels confident "like a veteran".
It contains the author's life experienxe.
I consider that in our world it's important to know that such cruelty is even in schools.
Therefore, parents shouls be careful when choosing a school for their children.

عنوان
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  صوّت الآن
- إضافة تصحيح جديد - عنوان
جملة 1
- In th 1st conflict the author reveals the attitude of the crowd against the newcomer.
  صوّت الآن
- إضافة تصحيح جديد - جملة 1
جملة 2
- The 2d conflict allows the reader to trace the internal changes of the main character in the beginning and at the end of this story.
  صوّت الآن
- إضافة تصحيح جديد - جملة 2
جملة 3
- In the 1st day of school the author is very confused and timid, he is afraid of peers.
  صوّت الآن
- إضافة تصحيح جديد - جملة 3
جملة 4
- A week later he gets used to the surroundings and feels confident "like a veteran".
  صوّت الآن
- إضافة تصحيح جديد - جملة 4
جملة 5
- It contains the author's life experienxe.
  صوّت الآن
- إضافة تصحيح جديد - جملة 5
جملة 6
- I consider that in our world it's important to know that such cruelty is even in schools.
  صوّت الآن
- إضافة تصحيح جديد - جملة 6
جملة 7
- Therefore, parents shouls be careful when choosing a school for their children.
  صوّت الآن
- إضافة تصحيح جديد - جملة 7