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My First Paragraph
Hi, my name is Yohan Gomez.
I'm 28 years old, I want to learn englihs because I want immigrate in search of opportunities for my family and improves conditions in the future for my daughters.
Thank you every one, your help will be invaluable to my learning.

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- My First Paragraph
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- Hi, my name is Yohan Gomez.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
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- I'm 28 years old, I want to learn englihs because I want immigrate in search of opportunities for my family and improves conditions in the future for my daughters.
  투표하세요!
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- Thank you every one, your help will be invaluable to my learning.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3