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Presentation.
Hello.
My name is Sergey. My age is 23.
I like to traveler.I was in meny city of Russian.
Now I am treveling in Europe.
I learn English to cocommunicate with people.
I want to know English very good.

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- Presentation.
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句子 1
- Hello.
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句子 2
- My name is Sergey. My age is 23.
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句子 3
- I like to traveler.I was in meny city of Russian.
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句子 4
- Now I am treveling in Europe.
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句子 5
- I learn English to cocommunicate with people.
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句子 6
- I want to know English very good.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6