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Once,it was a perfect,warm summer evening.Teenagers were on holiday.Two friends Tom and Jack went for a long walk in the hills above the town.Seems,it was the most beautiful and peaceful place in the world.They were just enjoying the peace and the sound of the wind rusting softly in the trees, when suddenly they heard a very strange noise.
It was so scary!
In the next moment, Tom looked around but Jack was nowhere in sight.Tom was frightened,because he didn`t know what happend to his friend.
Looking around, he began to call Jack.After a while,his friend was found.They finaly arrived back at their apartment, exhausted and gaspng for breath.
They were so relived to back,but would they ever find out what it was that they had seen?

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- Once,it was a perfect,warm summer evening.Teenagers were on holiday.Two friends Tom and Jack went for a long walk in the hills above the town.Seems,it was the most beautiful and peaceful place in the world.They were just enjoying the peace and the sound of the wind rusting softly in the trees, when suddenly they heard a very strange noise.
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- It was so scary!
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- In the next moment, Tom looked around but Jack was nowhere in sight.Tom was frightened,because he didn`t know what happend to his friend.
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- Looking around, he began to call Jack.After a while,his friend was found.They finaly arrived back at their apartment, exhausted and gaspng for breath.
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- They were so relived to back,but would they ever find out what it was that they had seen?
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