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  • One day of last year I went to Agadir,morocco for my camp, I was very happy with my friends, we were going to swim in the sea everyday, so we were eating bread with tea at morning outside near the beach then we were playing football, volleyball, handball we were like these sports because it happy us, after we were again eating rise and other-thing for lunch then we went to countryside for fun us Achraf kalley

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    • One day of last year I went to Agadir,morocco for my camp, I was very happy with my friends, we were going to swim in the sea everyday, so we were eating bread with tea at morning outside near the beach then we were playing football, volleyball, handball we were like these sports because it happy us, after we were again eating rise and other-thing for lunch then we went to countryside for fun us Achraf kalley
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