從skizar來的文本 - English

  • why ?

  • i dont know with what i should start this topic , normally i dont like share my ideas with people , but now i do that because i'm angry very angry against me, against my life my lucky , sometimes i thing i'm the most unlucky personne who i meet in my life , unlucky with family, with study , with girls , as regards the girls LoL no comment about that , one time i was in love with a girl who she live so far away (sweden), i love her more than i love myself , one day she ask me if i want mary her when we finished study , she was very ashemad when she was asking me ,i remember that we was happy.
  • after a moment she leave me ,she broke my heart , because her family , hates arabs , she talk with her mather about our relation and she denied , i was furious not against her but against "lucky".

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    • i dont know with what i should start this topic , normally i dont like share my ideas with people , but now i do that because i'm angry very angry against me, against my life my lucky , sometimes i thing i'm the most unlucky personne who i meet in my life , unlucky with family, with study , with girls , as regards the girls LoL no comment about that , one time i was in love with a girl who she live so far away (sweden), i love her more than i love myself , one day she ask me if i want mary her when we finished study , she was very ashemad when she was asking me ,i remember that we was happy.
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    • after a moment she leave me ,she broke my heart , because her family , hates arabs , she talk with her mather about our relation and she denied , i was furious not against her but against "lucky".
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