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Text z Hajar96 - English

  • the beast

  • during my childhood ; I tried to be obedient , careful and sometimes patient ...
  • So I became the little big girl .
  • But when I started to grow up - and due to some Circumstances - my patience have done , and today I part from it .
  • Suddenly the beast who lived inside me , that I tried to kill it repeatedly is already alive .... and unfortunately blind ...
  • He did what he had to do and he left without apologazing and without saying goodbye , when and where will he come back ? honestly I don't know . what happened is happened , so the more important is what I learned from what happened : we are all humains and we are not perfect and we won't be perfect .. therefore , it is not necessary to try to be it because in the end you won't be what you try to be furthermore no one noticed what you were doing , even if you were doing something for his or her happiness even if you hindred yourself to do something that you like or something that makes you glad and also for his or her happiness ...
  • NO ONE OBSERVED WHAT YOU TRIED TO DO ... because in this world people can only see what the beast can do , and they will remember what he did ,but they couldn't observed before you became a beast .

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • But when I started to grow up - and due to some Circumstances - my patience have done , and today I part from it .
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 3PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 3
  • veta 4
    • Suddenly the beast who lived inside me , that I tried to kill it repeatedly is already alive .... and unfortunately blind ...
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 4PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 4
  • veta 5
    • He did what he had to do and he left without apologazing and without saying goodbye , when and where will he come back ? honestly I don't know . what happened is happened , so the more important is what I learned from what happened : we are all humains and we are not perfect and we won't be perfect .. therefore , it is not necessary to try to be it because in the end you won't be what you try to be furthermore no one noticed what you were doing , even if you were doing something for his or her happiness even if you hindred yourself to do something that you like or something that makes you glad and also for his or her happiness ...
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 5PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 5
  • veta 6
    • NO ONE OBSERVED WHAT YOU TRIED TO DO ... because in this world people can only see what the beast can do , and they will remember what he did ,but they couldn't observed before you became a beast .
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 6PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 6