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what are your hobbies
I love to travelling.
I have visited a lot of country, I never let one occasion to go.
I am curious and I need to know how people live in another country, our cultur, the history of the country..
I also like reading.
The last weekend I visited Anne Franck's house in Amsterdam and I bought the book.
As soon as I am in the subway, or as soon as I have the opportunity to be alone and quiet I read this diary.
I love that, it is a shape of journey and it is more cheaper.
Moreover I am the communication manager of the student law association and that takes all my free time.

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- I love to travelling.
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- I have visited a lot of country, I never let one occasion to go.
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- I am curious and I need to know how people live in another country, our cultur, the history of the country..
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- I also like reading.
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- The last weekend I visited Anne Franck's house in Amsterdam and I bought the book.
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- As soon as I am in the subway, or as soon as I have the opportunity to be alone and quiet I read this diary.
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- I love that, it is a shape of journey and it is more cheaper.
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- Moreover I am the communication manager of the student law association and that takes all my free time.
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