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Abroad vacations
Abroad vacations aren't amazing at all.
Looking at incredibly bluish seas is dull.
Swimming feels like taking a bath with a thousand people.
A thousand people who surprisingly accumulate like a thousand sheeple.
The air is extremely hot.
I don't like it a lot.
I'm really a tough guy.
But this kind of holidays makes me want to die !

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- Abroad vacations aren't amazing at all.
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- Looking at incredibly bluish seas is dull.
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- Swimming feels like taking a bath with a thousand people.
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- A thousand people who surprisingly accumulate like a thousand sheeple.
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- The air is extremely hot.
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- I don't like it a lot.
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- I'm really a tough guy.
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- But this kind of holidays makes me want to die !
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