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  • Electroni components : Difficulty of recycle and pollution

  • The increase of the electronic equipment which contain microelectronics components generate a multiplication of electronic wastes.
  • With a lifespan of more and more short the electronic objects are leading to around tens tons of wastes over the world every years.
  • This mountain of wastes could increase about 30% from now to 2017 and weight 65.4 million tons per years.
  • The question of these electronics wastes is worrying: on the one hand by their exponential numbers and on the other hand by the difficulty to recycle them.
  • They actually have important ecological imprint because of quantities of resources in water, metals and energy for their conception, fabrication, transport, use and recycle of electronic components.
  • They contains dangerous elements or metals for the environment.

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    • The question of these electronics wastes is worrying: on the one hand by their exponential numbers and on the other hand by the difficulty to recycle them.
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