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  • Africa rubbish tips

  • The tons of wastes that we product every years are found more and more in rubbish tips in Africa.
  • Childs and adolescents salvage metals especially the cooper and the gold of our electronic objects.
  • Without protection they break screens, burn cables, take off microelectronic components and they poison with dioxin created by the combustion of plastics.
  • People who work in rubbish tip are daily subject to toxic fumes and expose to serious damages for their health as cancers or neurologic lesions.
  • The quantity of electronic wastes in Africa have increased and have doubles for 3 years.
  • Elsewhere our modern devices destroy landscapes, poison earth, water and atmosphere.
  • Despite the crisis, sales of devices are rapidly expanding and gain emerging markets which boost the electronics wastes production.

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    • Without protection they break screens, burn cables, take off microelectronic components and they poison with dioxin created by the combustion of plastics.
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    • People who work in rubbish tip are daily subject to toxic fumes and expose to serious damages for their health as cancers or neurologic lesions.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
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    • Despite the crisis, sales of devices are rapidly expanding and gain emerging markets which boost the electronics wastes production.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7