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  • The number of Japanes tourists has been growing since 1985.
  • As the chart shows these are tourists that travel abroad.
  • In 1995 we can notice that the number is 3 times the figures given initially.
  • we also can see that in ten years the number is 3 times more huge, but that the growing has been particularly in the first five years.
  • Recording the Australias's data, there is been an incrasing of their Japanese tourist market.
  • Besides, in 1990, the tourist Japanese was grown in that year the japanese tourist market had a decreasing, from 5 millions to nearby 4 millions, and since that year the growing has no arrested.
  • So, differences of charts is essentially the continuous increasing of the number of japanese tourists that travel abroad, and the decrising of the Japan's tourist market in the periods where the number of travellers grows, not exactly fewer.

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    • we also can see that in ten years the number is 3 times more huge, but that the growing has been particularly in the first five years.
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    • Besides, in 1990, the tourist Japanese was grown in that year the japanese tourist market had a decreasing, from 5 millions to nearby 4 millions, and since that year the growing has no arrested.
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    • So, differences of charts is essentially the continuous increasing of the number of japanese tourists that travel abroad, and the decrising of the Japan's tourist market in the periods where the number of travellers grows, not exactly fewer.
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