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My ideal holiday.
My ideal holiday.
My ideal holiday in my imagition is Ibzza there they have all day, all night parties yong people have god electronic music at the beach, famous dj-s and singers.
I think every yong man must go to a party, where alone they can meet new people.
And I want go to Las Vegas in USA, where evrything what happened in Vegas stays in Vegas.

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- My ideal holiday.
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- My ideal holiday in my imagition is Ibzza there they have all day, all night parties yong people have god electronic music at the beach, famous dj-s and singers.
  赶紧投票吧！
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- I think every yong man must go to a party, where alone they can meet new people.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
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- And I want go to Las Vegas in USA, where evrything what happened in Vegas stays in Vegas.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4