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  • Hi everyone, my name is Joodar, I'm from Kyrgyzstan.
  • I live in Bishkek.
  • Bishkek is the capital of Kyrgyzstan. and I'm going to English course ,It's my first month and I would meet something Who wants it.
  • Because I need to practice more.
  • And I like to travel, to play football, reading and drawing .
  • Can you send me something a interesting text or can you recomend me interesting English books .
  • Thank you very much: )

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