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can you help me? I have a problem with my English
My day of the today, I went to American Course, there I learned new words.
Then after course I have going to hairdressers.I want to study to hairdresser.
) My English - I read very Good, I write not bed in English, but can't understand when I hear English, Why? Who is know?

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- can you help me? I have a problem with my English
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문장 1
- My day of the today, I went to American Course, there I learned new words.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- Then after course I have going to hairdressers.I want to study to hairdresser.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- ) My English - I read very Good, I write not bed in English, but can't understand when I hear English, Why? Who is know?
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3