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Hi everyone
I am Vietnamese.
Now i am learning English.
I can talk English but not much.
Actually i want to master english, that is my target.
So if you want to learn Vietnamese and search about our culture, i'll teach you.
We can help each other.

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- Hi everyone
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- I am Vietnamese.
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句子 2
- Now i am learning English.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
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- I can talk English but not much.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- Actually i want to master english, that is my target.
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句子 5
- So if you want to learn Vietnamese and search about our culture, i'll teach you.
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- We can help each other.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6