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Hi ! :)
Well, I want to speak about my best friend.
Her name's Oceane And she has 15 years old.
Oceane si very beautiful but she think she is fat !!!!
But i'ts wrong !!
She is very Nice and generous with others people.
I love my best friend she is the best...for me

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- Well, I want to speak about my best friend.
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- Her name's Oceane And she has 15 years old.
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- Oceane si very beautiful but she think she is fat !!!!
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- But i'ts wrong !!
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- She is very Nice and generous with others people.
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- I love my best friend she is the best...for me
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