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General information about me
Hello!
My name is Polina and I'm 17.
In the future I want study in Germany and for that I need English.
I hope that I will go to my choosen university.
After that I'm planning travel in different countries (my favorite are Canada, Spain, Norway and Swiss).
But it's very far dreams.
Now I want learn English and a little Germany.
Thanks for your attention!

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- Hello!
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- My name is Polina and I'm 17.
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- In the future I want study in Germany and for that I need English.
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- I hope that I will go to my choosen university.
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- After that I'm planning travel in different countries (my favorite are Canada, Spain, Norway and Swiss).
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- But it's very far dreams.
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- Now I want learn English and a little Germany.
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- Thanks for your attention!
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