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  • Toefl course in my friend's opinion is very boring and so many my friends that sleep in the class.
  • However, why does my friend say like that?, i think toefl lesson is very great for me, beside i learn english as well, i also learn how to make the good english written. because in this world, now it's time for learning english, the world won't wait you to be a good man, but you have to prepare it by yourself.
  • The world won't be hesitate with you :)

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    • However, why does my friend say like that?, i think toefl lesson is very great for me, beside i learn english as well, i also learn how to make the good english written. because in this world, now it's time for learning english, the world won't wait you to be a good man, but you have to prepare it by yourself.
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