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An invented trip
One years ago I used to take a bus to go to high school, which took me into another town.
The town was really small.
But now I usually take the underground in Rome, on my own.
In fact, I really do not know anyone here.
But I love this city.
I love his lights, his noise.
I love the junk food on the street and its monuments

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- An invented trip
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câu 1
- One years ago I used to take a bus to go to high school, which took me into another town.
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câu 2
- The town was really small.
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câu 3
- But now I usually take the underground in Rome, on my own.
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câu 4
- In fact, I really do not know anyone here.
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câu 5
- But I love this city.
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câu 6
- I love his lights, his noise.
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câu 7
- I love the junk food on the street and its monuments
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