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Try to write a story
He’s here, right in front of me.
His laugh sound through the room, and even though it’s mingle with those of my friends, I can differentiate its melody with disconcerting ease.
His blue eyes glitter with mischief, and stay focus on Candeece, with a wry smile.
He’s here, right in front of me.
Nearly, but then so far away.
It’s like he became a stranger.

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- He’s here, right in front of me.
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- His laugh sound through the room, and even though it’s mingle with those of my friends, I can differentiate its melody with disconcerting ease.
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- His blue eyes glitter with mischief, and stay focus on Candeece, with a wry smile.
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- He’s here, right in front of me.
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veta 5
- Nearly, but then so far away.
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- It’s like he became a stranger.
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