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Battle
Yesterday, an awful and deadly battle happened.
During this battle, a major, showed his skill as brillant leader ; he inflict to us a crushing defeat when he won the fight.
This battle was his last battle because he died during this battle, killed by United States military.
Our troups were not enough organized.
Opposite, they were largely responsible for the success of their victory, because that is them who decided to attacked.
It is their second landslide victory.
He will certainly stay in folk memory as a brillant leader.
Opposite, they were 2 Indian tribe.

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- Yesterday, an awful and deadly battle happened.
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- During this battle, a major, showed his skill as brillant leader ; he inflict to us a crushing defeat when he won the fight.
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- This battle was his last battle because he died during this battle, killed by United States military.
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句子 4
- Our troups were not enough organized.
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- Opposite, they were largely responsible for the success of their victory, because that is them who decided to attacked.
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- It is their second landslide victory.
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- He will certainly stay in folk memory as a brillant leader.
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- Opposite, they were 2 Indian tribe.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 8