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My life
Hello everyone .
I live in France for 9 years.
I didn't travel to a foreign country.
But I would like to discover new countries, new cultures, make new friends.
I'm fed up to stay in the same countries always.
My life is a routine: always school and home .
My hobbies are piano and singing .
I hope I'll speak english and deutsch fluid soon, because after my studies I'd like to live in England or Germany .
Now I'm on high school and the next year I will go in university but i don't know yet which job I want to do .

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- Hello everyone .
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- I live in France for 9 years.
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- I didn't travel to a foreign country.
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- But I would like to discover new countries, new cultures, make new friends.
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- I'm fed up to stay in the same countries always.
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- My life is a routine: always school and home .
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- My hobbies are piano and singing .
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- I hope I'll speak english and deutsch fluid soon, because after my studies I'd like to live in England or Germany .
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- Now I'm on high school and the next year I will go in university but i don't know yet which job I want to do .
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