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從Reddit來的文本 - English

  • CHANGE!

  • Hey!
  • My name is Reddit.
  • I'm 17 years old.
  • I'm a High Schooler turn to Collage Student, I never have a boyfriend.
  • It's not because i'm ugly.
  • Some boys likes me, but i just too shy to open my self.
  • i loved to make a wall between me and others.
  • i dont express my self much.
  • i dont care about my face and appareance.
  • but now, i realize i have to change!
  • i have to care about my face, thats why i'm doing treatment for my face.
  • and i change my style.
  • i'm trying to learn about fashion through magazines, television.
  • i choose to change.
  • please correct.

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